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01-02-2022, 05:53 AM

the word pregnant doesnt need a qualifying adjective or adverb
a decent editor would have culled it as wasted word
one is pregnant, whether you 'fell', 'discovered' or 'got' pregnant is unnecessary

the sentence read she fell pregnant.
should have started thusly
'Pregnant to her long-time partner..'

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Charlotte Bellis - by yousnoozeyoulose - 31-01-2022, 09:06 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Olive - 31-01-2022, 09:13 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Lilith7 - 31-01-2022, 10:42 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by TinkandTiff - 31-01-2022, 12:46 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Lilith7 - 31-01-2022, 01:34 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by yousnoozeyoulose - 31-01-2022, 01:38 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Lilith7 - 31-01-2022, 01:40 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Olive - 31-01-2022, 02:49 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Lilith7 - 31-01-2022, 04:11 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Magoo - 31-01-2022, 03:11 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by yousnoozeyoulose - 31-01-2022, 05:23 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Oh_hunnihunni - 31-01-2022, 05:54 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Lilith7 - 31-01-2022, 06:23 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Olive - 31-01-2022, 06:17 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by king1 - 31-01-2022, 07:11 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Olive - 31-01-2022, 07:55 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Oh_hunnihunni - 31-01-2022, 08:52 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by yousnoozeyoulose - 31-01-2022, 09:08 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Magoo - 01-02-2022, 05:53 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by kevlights - 02-02-2022, 04:30 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Outsider - 01-02-2022, 07:50 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Oh_hunnihunni - 01-02-2022, 07:57 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Magoo - 01-02-2022, 08:22 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Oh_hunnihunni - 01-02-2022, 09:10 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Praktica - 01-02-2022, 10:39 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by eljayv - 01-02-2022, 07:49 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by king1 - 01-02-2022, 09:10 PM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Magoo - 02-02-2022, 04:35 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Oh_hunnihunni - 02-02-2022, 06:06 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Magoo - 02-02-2022, 06:24 AM

RE: Charlotte Bellis - by Lilith7 - 02-02-2022, 10:30 AM

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